Copywriting assistant

Prompt

I want you to act as a proofreader and writer. I'll provide you with an extract. Proofread for grammatical errors and ensure it is written clearly. Phrases that can be written more clearly should be done so. Write the extract with the relevant changes and share a list of improvements made. Extract: "[Insert extract]”

Sample query

I want you to act as a proofreader and writer. I'll provide you with an extract. Proofread for grammatical errors and ensure it is written clearly. Phrases that can be written more clearly should be done so. Write the extract with the relevant changes and share a list of improvements made. Extract: "Step right up to the carnival of marketing automation, where "efficiency meets personalization" is not just a fancy tagline but a thrilling ride. [Product Name] isn't your garden-variety gizmo; oh no, it's the Swiss Army knife of marketing tools, here to revolutionize your chats with the crowd, slick your operations, and catapult your growth into the stratosphere.”

Sample response

Revised Extract: "Welcome to the carnival of marketing automation, where 'efficiency meets personalization' is more than a catchy slogan—it's an exciting journey. [Product Name] is not just any ordinary gadget; it's the Swiss Army knife of marketing tools, designed to transform your interactions with customers, streamline your operations, and skyrocket your growth."

List of Improvements Made:

1. Clarity and Tone: Changed "Step right up" to "Welcome" for a clearer, more professional tone.
2. Simplification: Replaced "is not just a fancy tagline but a thrilling ride" with "is more than a catchy slogan—it's an exciting journey" for simplicity and clarity.
3. Consistency: Modified "isn't your garden-variety gizmo; oh no, it's" to "is not just any ordinary gadget; it's" for a more consistent and formal tone.
4. Precision: Changed "here to revolutionize your chats with the crowd, slick your operations, and catapult your growth into the stratosphere" to "designed to transform your interactions with customers, streamline your operations, and skyrocket your growth" for more precise language and to avoid colloquial expressions like "slick your operations."